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One of many experimental iterations ...

Miles Monroe

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Shanahan! Shan-a- han, hard-hearted harbinger of hogdom...

Brutally, bemuse-ed, bellicose ball coach…

Un-trust... ing. Un-know... ing. Un-love... ed?

We want glory back, we scream into the night air, like a fireman going to a
window that has no fire... except the passion in our hearts.

We’re desperate….

It's really hard!

This po-em... sucks

 

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Very nice Miles.

Except for the "It's really hard" phrasing. too much personal information!

who's the Ax Murderer?
 

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Shanahan! Shan-a- han, hard-hearted harbinger of hogdom...

Brutally, bemuse-ed, bellicose ball coach…

Un-trust... ing. Un-know... ing. Un-love... ed?

We want glory back, we scream into the night air, like a fireman going to a
window that has no fire... except the passion in our hearts.

We’re desperate….

It's really hard!

This po-em... sucks


"And now here's something we hope you really like......"
 

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